1. The above chart is how I intended the manuscript to feel at this point. Is it accurate? How would you describe the pacing so far?
2. Was the interaction between Alex and Erin authentic? What did you notice?
3. The diagram below is how I imagined the pacing for the entire story, where the stakes are raised slowly but tension rises and falls. Can you name any other story or media that uses this structure? When we get to the lulls I will let you know afterwards to see if the story loses its grip.